What about your predictions,
have they come true?
Is everything just like you said
just like you thought you knew.
And after all of this can you still see
the human side of me?
struggling for existence against
what I'm doomed to be.
I'm lying here without your soul.
It's so cold. It's time we go.
If there was ever hope
It left in hand with love
Now life's a struggle everyday
against our certain end.
Were searching for our separate ways.
I hope we find them.
and All that I see lies in red.
Misery without company.
staring vaguely, strangely
at a black and white TV.
And I think I might was well be dead,
then to live without you within me.
It's so hard to keep you where you're supposed to be.
So say Goodbye.
15 comments:
i love this!
hey, go to my blog and you'll find a link for seth and erin.
i loveth you!
hang on...your blog looks just like mine.
but it doesn't look like mine so you're fine. i like it too, but we've already had this discussion.
have fun. lay off the dudes for awhile you homo.
so nathanial, did you die? you know you can comment on your own post. It's ok here in the blog-o-sphere. It's not like you're on facebook ya know ...
what do you mean did i die?
yeah i saw that I could, but since i was talking to you, and i really had no idea if you would come back to my blog to read that same poem again, i just wondered if you would ever get my response.
and wtf? I like facebook.
ooooooh you mispelled my name!!
facebook is...boring, retarded, pointless, overrated, etc. i must say both myspace and blogger are much more creative as well.
you know you could visit me and katie once in a while? that is, unless we're not "good enough" for you.
make this easier for yourself and add links to get to our blogs. (clik the link on the side that says "edit me" or whatever and you'll get instructions)
it almost threw me off for a second when seth commented as "seth"...i'm thinking "huh?"
okay, so you did visit katie. it's just me you hate. i see.
dude you really need to update. worse than me. and that's bad.
wow I just realized that earlier I published as "Seth." I never read your comment, Erin, so hold the bitchin please.
so some "extra slow" and "hold the bitchin"...would you like fries with that?
omgosh it's a gripefest!
yeah like seriously!! and i didnt even log onto this thing for a coupla days so yall did it behind my back. and as far as updating, well .................
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cant really feel in the blanks right now, but if youll come back next week I'll have a neat little story about Hillary Clinton and Nancy Pelosi while you win the lottery and Al Gore delivers the Ozone Layer to your front door in a ziplock bag marked Fragile, Made in China.
yep yep yep
oh, wes . . .
wes wes wes....
i don't think i can wait any longer. please please please update!
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